Comments on: Haiku Death March(?)

By: Janet Ann Collins

Janet Ann Collins — Mon, 19 Jul 2010 00:32:44 +0000

Maybe eventually you can get the best ones published as a book.

By: Freeman

Freeman — Mon, 19 Jul 2010 00:13:01 +0000

I kind of liked the idea of being praised by some stranger named fean, but I love hearing from you, too!

Point out your lines and I’ll see if they correspond with mine. I’m actually thinking about revising one of them; if it’s on your list, too, I’ll run it by you first.

By: fran

fran — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 23:52:53 +0000

I see I misspelled my name in my comment. It looks rather Gaelic, don’t you think?

By: fean

fean — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 23:51:54 +0000

This is a wonderful piece in itself. There are some memorable lines here. Shall I point them out or do you know which ones I might choose? I also love the Elijah story metaphor. Brilliant.